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Onslaught by likaspapaya Onslaught by likaspapaya
Another old artwork. Made late '09
Not particularly keen on the pose of the rider as it looks really rigid. Definitely needs some editing.

Critique away guys.
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surthur Featured By Owner May 3, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
that guy coulda live in the panzer dragoon world. which just makes it even more awesome xD posewise, if his arm is more stretched it gets more dynamic (like the straight punchrule in comics). some watersplash might serve the already nice dynamic and some cool-warm contrast and help to make the beast pop more =)

cheers 1^^
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Aquasakura Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2010  Student General Artist
Cool That looks awesome. ^_^
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Margenal Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmm i guess you should have twisted a bit more his upper body or right arm to make the throwing stance more powerful.

Btw it's a very nice composition, good work!
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likaspapaya Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2010
Duly noted.
Probably explore that when I do a revision. Thanks!
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Margenal Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
YW, i know how hard it is to have a good pose, if you have some times need advices for my works.
Good luck!
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G-ov Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very interesting!
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